From c4aeebed1b58314b009508ed55b74476b0909797 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mike Thomas <78363703+mike-j-thomas@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 24 Jun 2022 16:00:36 +0900
Subject: [PATCH] typo-fixes (#6374)

* typo-fixes

- rounded up incorrect percentages for "Does your current management strategy allow you to effectively automate your custom security workflows?"
- Fixed typo "workspace" => "workforce"
- Rephrased "Device enrollment also adds to that complexity, and full compliance monitoring is impossible where it's lacking."

* Update state-of-device-management.ejs

- fixed typo "organizations"

* Added comma

between "open-source" and "cloud-based"

Co-authored-by: Tim Kern <tim@fleetdm.com>
---
 .../pages/reports/state-of-device-management.page.js   | 10 +++++-----
 .../views/pages/reports/state-of-device-management.ejs |  8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/assets/js/pages/reports/state-of-device-management.page.js b/website/assets/js/pages/reports/state-of-device-management.page.js
index 8e4aa29731..1a6d13c00d 100644
--- a/website/assets/js/pages/reports/state-of-device-management.page.js
+++ b/website/assets/js/pages/reports/state-of-device-management.page.js
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ parasails.registerPage('state-of-device-management', {
           labels: ['Yes', 'No',],
           datasets: [{
             label: 'percent',
-            data: [54.2, 45.9],
+            data: [54, 46],
             backgroundColor: ['#A182DF', '#E59CC4'],
           }]
         },
@@ -181,10 +181,10 @@ parasails.registerPage('state-of-device-management', {
           {label: 'Non-profit, K-12 education', percent: '7.32', color: '#CB73A3'},
         ],
         percentWorkingRemote: [
-          {label: '100 percent of workspace', percent: '27', color: '#A182DF'},
-          {label: '50 percent of workspace', percent: '27', color: '#E59CC4'},
-          {label: '25 percent of workspace', percent: '25', color: '#F1AC8C'},
-          {label: '0 percent of workspace', percent: '21', color: '#91D4C7'},
+          {label: '100 percent of workforce', percent: '27', color: '#A182DF'},
+          {label: '50 percent of workforce', percent: '27', color: '#E59CC4'},
+          {label: '25 percent of workforce', percent: '25', color: '#F1AC8C'},
+          {label: '0 percent of workforce', percent: '21', color: '#91D4C7'},
         ],
       },
       partOne: {
diff --git a/website/views/pages/reports/state-of-device-management.ejs b/website/views/pages/reports/state-of-device-management.ejs
index 99634ae51b..70001e088d 100644
--- a/website/views/pages/reports/state-of-device-management.ejs
+++ b/website/views/pages/reports/state-of-device-management.ejs
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
             <div class="col-md-4" purpose="report-note">
               <img alt="A checklist" src="/images/icon-checklist-36x36@2x.png">
               <h3>Verifying compliance across devices</h3>
-              <p>Our respondents reported that verifying compliance in real time across their devices is a successful best practice, yet 22.9% say doing so is proving difficult. Device enrollment also adds to that complexity, and where it's lacking, full compliance monitoring is impossible.</p>
+              <p>Our respondents reported that verifying compliance in real time across their devices is a successful best practice, yet 22.9% say doing so is proving difficult. Device enrollment also adds to that complexity, and full compliance monitoring is impossible where it's lacking.</p>
             </div>
             <div class="col-md-4" purpose="report-note">
               <img alt="A compliant laptop with a checkmark" src="/images/icon-enrolled-device-36x36@2x.png">
@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@
         </div>
         <div purpose="subsection">
           <h3>54% have an MDM that allows them to automate custom security workflows</h3>
-          <p>54.2% say their MDM strategy allows them to automate custom security workflows, while 45.9% say it does not.</p>
+          <p>54% say their MDM strategy allows them to automate custom security workflows, while 46% say it does not.</p>
           <div purpose="chart-card" class="mb-0">
             <span purpose="chart-title">Does your current management strategy allow you to effectively automate your custom security workflows?</span>
             <div purpose="chart-container">
@@ -511,8 +511,8 @@
         </div>
         <div purpose="subsection" class="mb-0">
           <h2>Summary</h2>
-          <p>With the expected growth of remote work in the future and the number of malicious actors exploiting vulnerable endpoints on the rise, originations must have a robust MDM. Security is a top priority for our respondents. This means using multi-factor authentication across devices and protecting third-party apps and packages. Zero-touch enrollment is another priority to increase enrollment rates.</p>
-          <p>For teams that want more endpoint protection — as many as half of the security professionals we surveyed — an open-source cloud-based solution that is easy to set up, has built-in security defaults, and gives real-time visibility into their fleet will satisfy their MDM priorities.</p>
+          <p>With the expected growth of remote work in the future and the number of malicious actors exploiting vulnerable endpoints on the rise, organizations must have a robust MDM. Security is a top priority for our respondents. This means using multi-factor authentication across devices and protecting third-party apps and packages. Zero-touch enrollment is another priority to increase enrollment rates.</p>
+          <p>For teams that want more endpoint protection — as many as half of the security professionals we surveyed — an open-source, cloud-based solution that is easy to set up, has built-in security defaults, and gives real-time visibility into their fleet will satisfy their MDM priorities.</p>
         </div>
       </div>
       <div purpose="report-section" id="part-6">