From b49008bb303e365f4c18782b597f4a10a4a44995 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mike McNeil <mikermcneil@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 15 Dec 2023 03:35:40 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Handbook: Tweaks to messaging (#15684)

Mike T, I did not update the messaging framework yet doc. (want to get
your feedback first)
---
 website/views/pages/fleet-mdm.ejs | 7 ++++---
 website/views/pages/homepage.ejs  | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/views/pages/fleet-mdm.ejs b/website/views/pages/fleet-mdm.ejs
index cb23f8f8a2..961931a3ee 100644
--- a/website/views/pages/fleet-mdm.ejs
+++ b/website/views/pages/fleet-mdm.ejs
@@ -48,8 +48,9 @@
         <h3>Convention over configuration</h3>
         <p>Configure your users' computers with sensible defaults, or customize every traditional MDM feature exactly how you want it with Fleet's API, CLI, and webhooks.</p>
         <div purpose="checklist" class="flex-column d-flex">
-          <p>Set up and verify ongoing compliance with CIS standards (one click, 400+ queries, supported by Fleet)</p>
-          <p>Tasked with zero trust? Use sensible, enterprise-ready device health checks from the community</p>
+          <p>Migrate devices quickly with out-of-the-box features, or control every detail using a modern REST API</p>
+          <p>Tasked with zero trust? Use sensible, enterprise-ready device health checks from the community, or build your own</p>
+          <p>Set up and verify ongoing compliance with CIS standards (one click, 400+ queries, supported by Fleet), or pick and choose baselines for different environments</p>
           <p>Use default workflows for employee offboarding, or run any low-level MDM command</p>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -75,7 +76,7 @@
       </div>
       <div purpose="feature-text" class="d-flex flex-column">
         <h3>ClickOps or DevOps</h3>
-        <p>Manage your IT infrastructure in any browser or use git to make infrastructure changes as code. You can use the CLI or API to automate the deployment, configuration, and monitoring of your devices.</p>
+        <p>Manage your IT infrastructure in any browser, or use git to make changes using your existing <a href="https://fleetdm.com/handbook/company/why-this-way#why-direct-responsibility">approval processes</a> and audit trail.</p>
       </div>
     </div>
 
diff --git a/website/views/pages/homepage.ejs b/website/views/pages/homepage.ejs
index 3d4dfd0deb..d1392cf0a2 100644
--- a/website/views/pages/homepage.ejs
+++ b/website/views/pages/homepage.ejs
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
     <div purpose="platform-block" class="d-flex flex-lg-row flex-column justify-content-between mx-auto align-items-lg-center align-items-start" :class="[selectedCategory === 'device-management' ? 'show' : 'hidden']">
       <div purpose="category-text-block" class="d-flex flex-column">
         <h3>Manage devices like code</h3>
-        <p>Automate the management of your fleet of devices with increased visibility and control, improved stability, all while automating configuration deployments using GitOps.</p>
+        <p>Manage your IT infrastructure in any browser, or use git to make changes using your existing approval processes and audit trail.</p>
         <a purpose="animated-arrow-button-red" class="text-nowrap" href="/device-management">More about device management</a>
       </div>
       <div purpose="category-image">