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 ## Solution
 
-So, their refinements eventually led to a replacement of their legacy device management tooling with Fleet: a cross-platform device management solution that supports macOS, multiple Linux flavors, Windows, iOS / iPadOS, Chromebook, and Android.
+Their refinements eventually led to a replacement of their legacy device management tooling with Fleet: a cross-platform device management solution that supports macOS, multiple Linux flavors, Windows, iOS / iPadOS, Chromebook, and Android.
 
 The company was already using Fleet in early 2023 for managing [osquery](https://www.osquery.io/) in threat detection and compliance use cases with [scheduled queries](https://fleetdm.com/guides/queries).
 
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-The ability to easily build Fleet's agent deployment packages allowed a quick install of `fleetd` across the company's devices. By supporting all of their platforms, Fleet enabled the comapny to deploy `fleetd` for managing osquery and device management, elimintating legacy tooling in the process.
+The ability to easily build Fleet's agent deployment packages allowed a quick install of `fleetd` across the company's computers. By supporting all of their platforms, Fleet enabled the comapny to deploy `fleetd` for managing osquery and device management, elimintating legacy tooling in the process.
 
 ### Audits
 
-By switching to Fleet, the company wasted less time around device audits by unblocking data collection and overcoming change management inertia, allowing IT to move faster with less manual intervention. 
+Switching to Fleet meant wasting less time on device audits by unblocking data collection and overcoming change management inertia. This allows IT to move faster with less manual intervention. 
 
 ### Device health