diff --git a/website/views/pages/platform.ejs b/website/views/pages/platform.ejs
index 2095bf64ee..2766682ed8 100644
--- a/website/views/pages/platform.ejs
+++ b/website/views/pages/platform.ejs
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
     <div purpose="platform-banner" class="container-fluid">
       <div style="max-width:1200px;" class="flex-row row mx-xl-auto justify-content-center justify-content-lg-start">
         <div purpose="platform-banner-text" class="col-md-6 px-0 col-12 flex-grow-1 text-center text-lg-left mx-xl-auto mx-md-0 mx-auto">
-          <h1>Developer-friendly IT</h1>
+          <h1>Developer-friendly telemetry</h1>
           <h4>One agent, any platform, up-to-the-minute data</h4>
-          <p>Fleet allows you to harness the power of osquery to stream accurate, real-time data from all of your devices. It’s easy to deploy at scale, granular and open source.</p>
+          <p>Fleet lets you harness the power of osquery to stream accurate, real-time data from all your endpoints. No matter how many you have.</p>
           <div class="flex-row row justify-content-around mx-md-0 mx-4 pt-2">
             <a href="/get-started?tryitnow" class="btn btn-primary col-md-6 col-12">Try it out</a>
             <a style="color:#F9FAFC;" href="https://calendly.com/fleetdm/demo?utm_source=platform+demo" target="_blank" class="btn col-md-6 col-12">Schedule a demo <img class="d-inline" alt="A small white arrow pointing to the right" src="/images/platform/icon-right-arrow-white-16x16@2x.png"></a>
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 
   <div purpose="platform-content" class="container-fluid">
     <div class="mx-auto">
-      <h2 class="text-md-center">Maintain secure laptops & servers</h2>
+      <h2 class="text-md-center">Maintain secure workstations and servers</h2>
       <div purpose="platform-logos" class="row pb-2 justify-content-around">
         <div class="col-12 col-sm-6 justify-content-sm-end justify-content-center pb-3 d-flex pr-sm-0">
           <div class="card grow mx-3">