From 65526f28bd6e3f9374d17a70086d486fd3c5ec23 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mike Thomas <78363703+mike-j-thomas@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 25 Jun 2025 03:46:54 +0900
Subject: [PATCH] Update device-management.ejs (#30269)

closes https://github.com/fleetdm/confidential/issues/11072

I've reworded each bullet to emphasize speed. Let me know if I've
overegged it or if my reordering of the points has negatively affected
the meaning. For example, does "real-time confirmation of patch and
config changes" ring true instead of "Auto-verify patches and
settings..."
---
 website/views/pages/device-management.ejs | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/views/pages/device-management.ejs b/website/views/pages/device-management.ejs
index c5d52c0538..dcb6113792 100644
--- a/website/views/pages/device-management.ejs
+++ b/website/views/pages/device-management.ejs
@@ -721,9 +721,9 @@
             <h2>Shorten the feedback loop</h2>
             <p>Spend less time debugging whether changes actually happened.</p>
             <div purpose="checklist" class="flex-column d-flex">
-              <p>Use a single, open platform for {{ bowser.windows ? 'Windows, Apple' : 'Apple, Windows'}}, and Linux.</p>
-              <p>Auto-verify patches and settings on users’ devices. Avoid unnecessary tickets.</p>
-              <p>Every change to a policy or security control is tracked and auditable in Fleet’s UI, or in your logs.</p>
+              <p>Get near-instant visibility into your Apple, Linux, and Windows devices from a single, open platform.</p>
+              <p>Verify security changes in seconds — every action is tracked in Fleet’s UI or your logs.</p>
+              <p>Avoid tickets with real-time confirmation of patch and config changes.</p>
             </div>
           </div>
           <div purpose="feature-image">