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docs: improve readability, use future tense to indicate future events (#49578)

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Summary of changes:
* change 'notice that' -> note that
* break large sentence to smaller ones to improve readability
* use future tense & modal verbs to indicate future events
PR Close #49578
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Sid 2023-03-24 12:22:58 +05:30 committed by Andrew Kushnir
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@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ This section guides you through editing the HTML, also known as the template.
<code-example header="src/app/product-list/product-list.component.html" path="getting-started/src/app/product-list/product-list.component.3.html"></code-example>
The application now displays the name and description of each product in the list.
Notice that the final product does not have a description paragraph.
Note that the final product does not have a description paragraph.
Angular doesn't create the `<p>` element because the product's description property is empty.
<div class="lightbox">
@ -178,8 +178,8 @@ For more information, see [Introduction to components and templates](guide/archi
Currently, the product list displays the name and description of each product.
The `ProductListComponent` also defines a `products` property that contains imported data for each product from the `products` array in `products.ts`.
The next step is to create a new alert feature that uses product data from the `ProductListComponent`.
The alert checks the product's price, and, if the price is greater than &dollar;700, displays a **Notify Me** button that lets users sign up for notifications when the product goes on sale.
The next step is to create a new alert feature that will use product data from the `ProductListComponent`.
The alert should check the product's price. If it is found to be greater than &dollar;700, a Notify Me button should be displayed. When a user clicks on the button, they should be able to sign up for notifications that will inform them when the product goes on sale.
This section walks you through creating a child component, `ProductAlertsComponent`, that can receive data from its parent component, `ProductListComponent`.